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Princess — “See, see my beauty will be sav'd by merit” — Love's Labour's Lost, Act 4, Scene 1, line 24



Love's Labour's Lost Play summary   ·IV i 24Scene summary  · Verse
Princess

See see, my beauty will be saved by merit!
O heresy in fair, fit for these days!
A giving hand, though foul, shall have fair praise.
But come, the bow: now mercy goes to kill,
And shooting well is then accounted ill.
Thus will I save my credit in the shoot:
Not wounding, pity would not let me do't;
If wounding, then it was to show my skill,
That more for praise than purpose meant to kill.
And out of question so it is sometimes,
Glory grows guilty of detested crimes,
When, for fame's sake, for praise, an outward part,
We bend to that the working of the heart;
As I for praise alone now seek to spill
The poor deer's blood, that my heart means no ill.
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Original: See see, my beauty will be saved by merit!
Modern: Look, look, my reputation will be saved by my skill!

Original: O heresy in fair, fit for these days!
Modern: Oh, what a twisted idea of beauty, perfect for our times!

Original: A giving hand, though foul, shall have fair praise.
Modern: A generous person, even if they’re ugly, will get good praise.

Original: But come, the bow: now mercy goes to kill,
Modern: But here comes the bow: now kindness becomes killing,

Original: And shooting well is then accounted ill.
Modern: And good marksmanship is then considered evil.

Original: Thus will I save my credit in the shoot:
Modern: This is how I’ll protect my reputation in this hunt:

Original: Not wounding, pity would not let me do’t;
Modern: If I don’t wound it, I’ll say pity wouldn’t let me do it;

Original: If wounding, then it was to show my skill,
Modern: If I do wound it, then it was to show off my ability,

Original: That more for praise than purpose meant to kill.
Modern: Aiming more for applause than actually intending to kill.

Original: And out of question so it is sometimes,
Modern: And without a doubt, this is how it sometimes goes,

Original: Glory grows guilty of detested crimes,
Modern: The pursuit of glory leads to hateful crimes,

Original: When, for fame’s sake, for praise, an outward part,
Modern: When, for the sake of fame, for praise, for appearance,

Original: We bend to that the working of the heart;
Modern: We twist our true feelings to match what’s expected;

Original: As I for praise alone now seek to spill
Modern: Just as I now seek only for praise to spill

Original: The poor deer’s blood, that my heart means no ill.
Modern: This poor deer’s blood, though my heart means no harm.

In Act IV, Scene 1 of “Love’s Labour’s Lost,” the Princess of France and her ladies are engaged in a hunting expedition in the park. Boyet brings word that the King of Navarre and his lords are approaching, disguised as Muscovites, intending to woo the ladies at their own game. The Princess and her companions decide to outwit the men by exchanging identities among themselves and wearing masks, ensuring that each lord will unknowingly court the wrong lady. They also exchange the gifts and love tokens the men had previously sent them, further complicating the planned deception.

When the King and his lords arrive in their Muscovite disguises, accompanied by music and elaborate costumes, they attempt to engage the masked ladies in courtly conversation and dancing. However, their plan backfires completely as each man ends up wooing the wrong woman due to the ladies’ switched identities. The women speak in brief, dismissive responses and eventually withdraw, leaving the men confused and unsuccessful. After the ladies exit, the men remove their disguises and discuss their failed attempt, with Berowne suggesting they return later in their normal attire to try a more straightforward approach to winning the women’s favor.

“Love’s Labour’s Lost” opens with Ferdinand, the King of Navarre, and his three courtiers—Berowne, Longaville, and Dumain—taking a solemn oath to dedicate three years to scholarly pursuits while forswearing the company of women, fasting, and sleeping only three hours per night. Their noble intentions are immediately complicated by the arrival of the Princess of France and her three attending ladies—Rosaline, Maria, and Katharine—who come on a diplomatic mission regarding Aquitaine. Despite their vows, all four men quickly fall in love with the visiting ladies, though they initially attempt to hide their feelings from one another.

The romantic complications intensify when each man tries to secretly woo his chosen lady while believing himself to be the only oath-breaker. Comic relief is provided by a cast of eccentric characters including Don Armado, a bombastic Spanish knight who loves the country wench Jaquenetta; Costard, a simple clown; and the pedantic schoolmaster Holofernes. The ladies, aware of the men’s affections, decide to test their suitors’ sincerity by disguising themselves at a masque, leading to a delightful scene of mistaken identities where each man woos the wrong woman.

The play builds toward what seems like a conventional comic resolution with multiple betrothals, but Shakespeare subverts expectations in the final act. News arrives that the Princess’s father, the King of France, has died, casting a somber shadow over the festivities. The ladies impose a year-long trial on their suitors—the men must prove their love’s constancy through a period of good works and patient waiting. The play concludes unusually for a Shakespearean comedy, with promises of future union rather than immediate marriages, ending with the famous songs of Spring and Winter that celebrate the eternal cycle of seasons and human nature.