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Love's Labour's Lost
·V ii 737 ·
Verse
Berowne Honest plain words best pierce the ear of grief; And by these badges understand the king. For your fair sakes have we neglected time, Play'd foul play with our oaths: your beauty, ladies, Hath much deform'd us, fashioning our humours Even to the opposed end of our intents: And what in us hath seem'd ridiculous,-- As love is full of unbefitting strains, All wanton as a child, skipping and vain, Form'd by the eye and therefore, like the eye, Full of strange shapes, of habits and of forms, Varying in subjects as the eye doth roll To every varied object in his glance: Which parti-coated presence of loose love Put on by us, if, in your heavenly eyes, Have misbecomed our oaths and gravities, Those heavenly eyes, that look into these faults, Suggested us to make. Therefore, ladies, Our love being yours, the error that love makes Is likewise yours: we to ourselves prove false, By being once false for ever to be true To those that make us both,--fair ladies, you: And even that falsehood, in itself a sin, Thus purifies itself and turns to grace. |
Original: Honest plain words best pierce the ear of grief;
Modern: Simple, honest words work best when someone is upset;
Original: And by these badges understand the king.
Modern: And by these signs, you can understand what the king means.
Original: For your fair sakes have we neglected time,
Modern: Because of your beauty, we have wasted time,
Original: Play’d foul play with our oaths: your beauty, ladies,
Modern: Broken our promises: your beauty, ladies,
Original: Hath much deform’d us, fashioning our humours
Modern: Has completely changed us, shaping our moods
Original: Even to the opposed end of our intents:
Modern: To be the complete opposite of what we intended:
Original: And what in us hath seem’d ridiculous,–
Modern: And what has seemed foolish about us,–
Original: As love is full of unbefitting strains,
Modern: Since love is full of inappropriate behaviors,
Original: All wanton as a child, skipping and vain,
Modern: As playful as a child, jumping around and shallow,
Original: Form’d by the eye and therefore, like the eye,
Modern: Created by what we see and therefore, like the eye,
Original: Full of strange shapes, of habits and of forms,
Modern: Full of weird appearances, behaviors and forms,
Original: Varying in subjects as the eye doth roll
Modern: Changing focus as the eye moves
Original: To every varied object in his glance:
Modern: To every different thing it looks at:
Original: Which parti-coated presence of loose love
Modern: This colorful display of casual love
Original: Put on by us, if, in your heavenly eyes,
Modern: That we put on, if, in your beautiful eyes,
Original: Have misbecomed our oaths and gravities,
Modern: Has made our vows and serious nature look bad,
Original: Those heavenly eyes, that look into these faults,
Modern: Those beautiful eyes that see these mistakes
Original: Suggested us to make. Therefore, ladies,
Modern: Tempted us to make. So, ladies,
Original: Our love being yours, the error that love makes
Modern: Since our love belongs to you, the mistake that love makes
Original: Is likewise yours: we to ourselves prove false,
Modern: Is also yours: we prove unfaithful to ourselves,
Original: By being once false for ever to be true
Modern: By breaking our word once so we can always be faithful
Original: To those that make us both,–fair ladies, you:
Modern: To those who complete us both,–beautiful ladies, you:
Original: And even that falsehood, in itself a sin,
Modern: And even that lie, which is itself a sin,
Original: Thus purifies itself and turns to grace.
Modern: Actually cleanses itself and becomes a virtue.
In Act V, Scene ii, line 737 and the surrounding passage of “Love’s Labour’s Lost,” Marcade arrives at the Princess of France’s camp with grave news: her father, the King of France, has died. This announcement immediately transforms the festive atmosphere that has dominated the scene, where the young lords and ladies have been engaged in elaborate games of courtship and wit. The Princess must immediately prepare to return to France to assume her duties, cutting short the romantic developments that have been unfolding between the couples.
The lords—the King of Navarre, Berowne, Longaville, and Dumaine—attempt to declare their love and propose marriage to their respective ladies, but the women impose conditions before accepting. The Princess tells the King he must spend a year in a “forlorn and naked hermitage,” while Rosaline requires Berowne to spend a year visiting the sick and dying to test whether his wit can bring comfort to the suffering. Katharine and Maria give similar year-long trials to Longaville and Dumaine. The play concludes not with marriages but with postponement, as the couples agree to part ways with the understanding that if the lords successfully complete their tasks, the ladies will accept their suits. The final songs of Spring and Winter, performed by the characters representing these seasons, close the play on a note that blends celebration with the sobering realities the lords must face.
“Love’s Labour’s Lost” opens with Ferdinand, the King of Navarre, and his three courtiers—Berowne, Longaville, and Dumain—taking a solemn oath to dedicate three years to scholarly pursuits while forswearing the company of women, fasting, and sleeping only three hours per night. Their noble intentions are immediately complicated by the arrival of the Princess of France and her three attending ladies—Rosaline, Maria, and Katharine—who come on a diplomatic mission regarding Aquitaine. Despite their vows, all four men quickly fall in love with the visiting ladies, though they initially attempt to hide their feelings from one another.
The romantic complications intensify when each man tries to secretly woo his chosen lady while believing himself to be the only oath-breaker. Comic relief is provided by a cast of eccentric characters including Don Armado, a bombastic Spanish knight who loves the country wench Jaquenetta; Costard, a simple clown; and the pedantic schoolmaster Holofernes. The ladies, aware of the men’s affections, decide to test their suitors’ sincerity by disguising themselves at a masque, leading to a delightful scene of mistaken identities where each man woos the wrong woman.
The play builds toward what seems like a conventional comic resolution with multiple betrothals, but Shakespeare subverts expectations in the final act. News arrives that the Princess’s father, the King of France, has died, casting a somber shadow over the festivities. The ladies impose a year-long trial on their suitors—the men must prove their love’s constancy through a period of good works and patient waiting. The play concludes unusually for a Shakespearean comedy, with promises of future union rather than immediate marriages, ending with the famous songs of Spring and Winter that celebrate the eternal cycle of seasons and human nature.